Would we taste the same if we dripped with the same Vehemance?
And can we go back to a time where we shyly hid our middle names,
And touch was a thing we weren't used to?
Silence hid the same way our gaze did from each other.
Our feet were a thing to be studied, it seemed.
As we fumbled awkwardly,
Our hands a thing to be twisted.
And twisted again.
But would they interlock the way we longed?
Copious amounts of emotion filtered through our words.
And the right ear could pick out a note of loneliness.
The right nose, pick up the scent of our nervous fever as we committed to something uncertain.
Unsure.
We were so unsure.
...Excuses.
And we silently inquire
Is this the way it was supposed to be?
Do we connect the same way we had intended to?
Are we tainted with appetite, now, that we've had a taste of giving in?
This passion, can it be found, or are we to invent it from the wrong feelings?
We apostatize each others causes.
We watched it Decay, but still we clung.
Your attentions were split with the silence.
You desert us now, but still you're here.
Echoes.
Can we drift so far apart without a note of virtue?
Can we fade so easily without being washed away?
Unclean.
We felt so unclean.
Preeminent bliss lingers in the background.
And it waits for us to hold it.
But god damned it, we can't hold it.















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Anyhow, I really enjoyed this piece, it's relatable and real. Wonderful work as always. ^_^
Dont be afraid to let yourself go to someone, infact when the time is right.. I think you cant control it. And for those reasons it is right. I like to look at the bad as being something which made the good even better, and the overall experience, something which can teach you alot about yourself. Relationships can still have love, but one or both of the people are no longer 'in love'. That doesn't neccasarily make it a bad thing, just a different place.
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I'd say, sex is not the main prison for relationships... the prison is the image that the thought can create of each others... if I have sex with the image of someone, the image I've created of her/him, then I cannot make love to her/him, here and now... that is hte prison.. to me...
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Thankyou so much for your words.
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Take a look at my Sculptures.
Emotive Surrealism. You know you want it.
I also make Musicians, too.
2 things...
1. I'm really happy I chose to read this poem.
2. I'm even happier that you shared it - Thanks.
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